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"Follow Me"
Imagination
Future silent
Contemplation
"Oh Release Me"
No more limits
Follow curves
And bear life's pivots
"Follow Me"
Intense desire
Yearn to live
In future's fire
"Oh Release Me"
Long to fly
This stream of life
Begins to dry
"Follow Me"
Just out of reach
Future's border
Yearn to breach
"Oh Release Me"
Restrained heart
Longing for
A fresh new start
"Follow Me"
No longer hollow
"Oh Release Me"
Thus to follow
©2008 ~Salem-rae
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okay, so if you have read my most recent journal, you will realize where the inspiration for this poem came. I haven't done one that rhymed in a while, but I'm content with the outcome of this one ^~^ I appreciate any and all critiques on it!! I wrote it in a minute or two lol
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~yesbutnotwithyou:iconyesbutnotwithyou: Apr 28, 2008, 10:35:28 AM
wow another one that is well done. . . .i didnt reply on you journal but i did read it, and i must say. . . .please share your inspiration!

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If you need to fall apart, I can mend a broken heart, If you need to crash then crash and burn you're not alone.
~Salem-rae:iconSalem-rae: Apr 28, 2008, 12:06:40 PM
Thankies hon ;) Appreciate it! Love youuuu!!

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Refuse to set limits, aim beyond the sky

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Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most :p